The Sword of Zeheran Chapter 8 Page 4
We follow that up with one of my least favorite pages. I thought it would be dramatic to pull back and show Brads leap in silhouette, but instead I ended up drawing stick figures. That panel completely fails. The fight sequence is confusing, and while I like the shot of Brad fighting Tumar outside the panels, it’s never clear what happened. I wanted to convey a bit of the confusion of a fight, and I succeeded, but too well, I think.
On the upside, you can make out where Rick hid my name in the runes in the lower left panel.